Living in a dark reality
Never questioning the validity
Darkness in the cave
Ignorance until the grave
One must break threw the shackles
And see that life outside the cave sparkles
This one has a responsibility
To fix the others' askewed reality
By questioning the shadows
The puppeteers will show
The unknown brings fear
But why live in a world so unclear
You could find the light
And discover what's right
Life is awaiting to be discovered
Don't stay in the cave ignorantly covered
The rhyming scheme is different from what I have seen but besides that good job. Simple and to the point.
ReplyDeleteGreat job kid, great rhymes and diction.
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